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I just wanted to say
I’m glad you gave me a chance
Didn’t push me away

I was afraid that you would be scared
Scared away by my obsession
Now I know that your feelings were layered

I wish you would have told me
I thought about you all day
You enjoyed my curiosity

Even had some of your own
At times I wish you met me first
Together away from the world we could have flown

I just wanted to say
I’m glad you gave me a chance
Didn’t push me away

I just want to say
I love you
©2005-2009 ~bl0ndie-babe
:iconbl0ndie-babe:

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It's not one of my favorites, but I have been trying to start writing again and this is one of my first of a bunch (hopefully). I think that everyone knows what it is about.

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:iconbunnyfugger:
brief and to the point, I like the shape of itthe way it blossoms out then tapers to the end.
:icononceloved:
its about ......COREY... ( like that was a hard one lol)

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jessaleigh
:iconnitemaregargoyle:
Then structure is unique and nice the way it fits the poem! I really like this one.

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"This is going to be a weird analogy, but... death is a lot like sex. It's frightening and awkward your first time, but you know you're going to do it anyway. Both are a part of life, so you might as well accept it." ~Chris
:iconbl0ndie-babe:
yay! thank you so much. you have no idea how hard it was to try to write again and especially just remembering what it was like back then..whew..that was a big load off of my shoulders. i didnt think anyone would have liked it! thank you!

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

"Some people without brains do an awful lot of talking." -The Scarecrow
:iconbl0ndie-babe:
haha no kidding!! thats why i wasnt worried about saying what it was about..because, well, isnt all of my writing about him? i guess you just know me too well ;)

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

"Some people without brains do an awful lot of talking." -The Scarecrow
:iconbl0ndie-babe:
thank you! i really appreciate it when people that i dont know respond to something i do. yeah this was very brief, but i think that i like it that way. anyway, thanks so much for the comment!

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

"Some people without brains do an awful lot of talking." -The Scarecrow
:icononceloved:
I konw you inside and out....HEHEHEHE ( sorry corey, youve already won the compatition!) JUST KIDDING. Youve taken my bethy woowooo away and now i have none to hump LOL i dont REALLy hump her...although we have some VERY incriminating evidence *coughpicturescough* hehehehahhahahahaha lots and lots of umm...i think ive popped my corck and am finally fading away ill talk to you later beth...lve ya

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jessaleigh
:iconbl0ndie-babe:
wow! just..wow ;) those pictures you mention are hanging up above my desk here. i love you too jessie!!! :hug:

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

"Some people without brains do an awful lot of talking." -The Scarecrow
:icononceloved:
hehehehee, im sorry we didnt get to hump out this weekend LOL but maybe someother time

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jessaleigh

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